tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2305406123515843227.post7829156681475542074..comments2018-03-20T10:05:50.214+13:00Comments on Mia1514@HNP: My Writing About the Holidays Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2305406123515843227.post-89127304902121369452014-08-07T10:52:25.550+12:002014-08-07T10:52:25.550+12:00Mia
I liked the way you used paragrphs and I also ...Mia<br />I liked the way you used paragrphs and I also liked the way you used capital letters.<br />Next time you cuold end your writing with a simple conclusion.<br />Where did you stay in Rotorua? :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2305406123515843227.post-76838085423047224242014-08-07T10:46:05.346+12:002014-08-07T10:46:05.346+12:00I liked the way you used paragraphs I also like th...I liked the way you used paragraphs I also like that you had capital letters.<br />Next time you could end your writing with a simpile conclusion.<br />Where did you stay?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com